hope the game's good
not so bad grammer as everyone's seen to pick up. also get the layers straight as you always want the words, subtitles to be as visible as possible like the snow layer put that behind the text layer so its very visible. drawings are nice, but in actions they may appear different, unless there sprites, thats ok.
well the main point is at least theres a bio so you dont need to explain crap to people in the game where they came from ect. its just like the hand book in every game it comes with right?
i dont know why people complain about it when its like a handbook lol wierd i mean read that all it does. anyway if you get anyone playing the game your making and there saying theres alot lacking in character backround, yell at them and kick them then tell them to look at this lol.